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2. The C4D (I think) behind the dude flow to the right while the guys head tends to go towards the top. Meaning that the flow is off. 3. There isn't a big detail difference between foreground and background and the render isn't more sharpened than the background 4. I think it's boring, the subtext is pretty dull and pixelly, doesn't really match the overall color scheme. 5. The guys face is a focal, the thing that flows behind him drags atention, the OUCH part drags attention, the thathurt part asks for attention, the BG above the C4D is too detailed to create depth, depth is nearly there. So the focal is pretty much everywhere because too much things ask for attention, they want to be looked at. 6. I hope you do understand that sentence. |
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